These crime drawings are great Jamal - but there needs to be more of them. A full double paged spread would work nicely. And also the story with the brick needs clarifying - to express why it's perfect. Perhaps the murderer is a builder working on a building site by the thames? There needs to be some visual explanation of why it's perfect other than just the brick sinking in the water. But stylistically they're very expressive and well drawn.
Also - you did receive a sheet of feedback on your cake artwork. We found it on the floor when we tidied up the studio on the last day! It's in the office.
These crime drawings are great Jamal - but there needs to be more of them. A full double paged spread would work nicely. And also the story with the brick needs clarifying - to express why it's perfect. Perhaps the murderer is a builder working on a building site by the thames? There needs to be some visual explanation of why it's perfect other than just the brick sinking in the water. But stylistically they're very expressive and well drawn.
ReplyDeleteAlso - you did receive a sheet of feedback on your cake artwork. We found it on the floor when we tidied up the studio on the last day! It's in the office.
I Look forward to seeing your holiday projects.